Примеры эссе для IELTS Writing
Здесь вы увидите примеры написания эссе в моем исполнении. Их можно читать, разбирать, критиковать, находить ошибки, а меня самого можно за них осуждать, высмеивать, показывать на меня пальцем и включать в рубрику "Они позорят наше РАЙПО".
Напомню, что в настоящее время (2013 год) за модуль Writing я получаю 6.5 - 7.0. Если вам нужно больше, то пожалуйста, не тратьте свое время на прочтение моих произведений. Если же ваша цель 5 или 6 - возможно вы почерпнете отсюда какие-нибудь идеи. По крайней мере - о чем можно писать по той или иной теме.
Не знаю, надолго ли меня хватит и будет ли моя коллекция большой. Это уж как получится.
Немного о технологии написания, чтобы было понятно. Рукописный вариант, который вы увидите, и который увеличивается по щелчку, пишется цифровой ручкой. Это то, что получается у меня сразу после написания. После автоматического распознавания моих каракулей программой получается печатный вариант - это результат "второго прохода" с исправлением ошибок и небольшими перестановками в тексте. Все как на настоящем экзамене :)
Желаю вам приятного чтения :)
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Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life, some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one, Discuss both views and include your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own life and experience.
In today's modern world, advertising plays a significant role in people's lives influencing the minds, and making individuals think in the way the market expects. Some people believe that advertising plays a positive role encouraging an economic development. Others, who disagree, insist that advertising is very aggressive and tries to control people's behavior and style of living. This essay will discover all pros and cons of so called market engine and includeв by my own view of the subject.
From the positive perspective, nobody can deny that advertising allows people to learn more about some new goods and services coming up to the market and can help people save their money. For example, watching advertising in print and media carefully people may have a chance to buy the products they really need with an huge discount, invest money into the new profitable project etc. Moreover, the promotional campaigns play the conspicuous role in creation of diversity of media content we see on TV paying for the right of demonstration new films and shows. After all, some people who have their own web-sites on the Internet may put banners' on their pages and receive some money increasing their remuneration and so do I.
However, the negative side of advertising should be taken into consideration as well. It is no secrets that all those banners, posters and other kinds of promotion materials try to control people's' minds' and behavior. This is particularly dangerous for young people who cannot resist the offers of new modern goods and spend enormous amount of money in order to seem wealthy and fashionable. In this case, advertising seems to be more harmful than useful for refocuses people efforts to consumption instead of, for example, self-development, relationships, and а building of the perfect career.
To sum up, as we shift from having a market economy to becoming a market society where everything is for sale and market value dominate all sides of our life, advertising, in my opinion, plays rather positive role in people's lives. The point is it should be well-balanced with others aspects of social life; in this case the negative effect will be decreased.
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Some businesses prohibit smoking in any of their offices, some government have banned smoking in all public places, Do you agree or disagree that this is the right course of action? Give reasons for your opinion.
It is no question that the smoking of tobacco is harmful for people's health. The ban of smoking in public places, offices, and transport may affect the health situation in very positive way. Taking into consideration the reasons of the smoking ban opponents, I believe that that harmful habit should be obliterated from our life; therefore, I agree with the smoking ban. The reasons behind this approach are medical, social and economic.
From the medical point of view, the tobacco smoking have a noticeable negative effect on the health of both smokers and non-smokers. In fact, everyone knows that the nicotine, as a component of tobacco, is a very strong poison, the drop of which is able to kill a horse. Hence, the tobacco smokers spoil their health deliberately trying to belittle the destructive effect of their habit. What is worse, the smog of cigarettes is much more dangerous for people that surround the smoker and become the passive smokers. The result of both active and passive smoking is the same: the danger of such an awful illness as a lung cancer.
From the social viewpoint, smoking people create the unpleasant atmosphere around them and limit rights of other people to breathe the clean air. Although the smoking ban opponents believe that their right to smoke should be respected, they completely overlook toe fact that they discriminate other people who also have some rights. As a result, smokers might provoke the conflicts trying to advocate their right to smoke in prejudice of rights of other people.
From the economic perspective, the ban of smoking may have the very positive effect. Despite of the fact that tobacco manufacturers pay a huge taxes into countries budgets, the damage of nations health bring much more expenses. Indeed, any smoker is potentially the patient of the clinic with cancer related problems. In order to give him an appropriate care, the government has to spend the huge amount of money that is much bigger than taxes, manufacturers and sellers have paid. As a result, the smoking ban may improve the economic situation in general.
In conclusion, I completely agree with the tobacco smoking ban which may lead to improving of many spheres of people's life and make our cities more enjoyable places to live in.
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Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
As we shift from having a market economy to becoming a market society, the significance of financial education is growing undoubtedly. In fact, a lot of people around the globe struggle financially because they cannot master money flows. In my opinion, all students need to learn these essential skills in order to live long, happy and wealthy lives.
It is undeniable that money plays a conspicuous role in modern people's life. This is particularly true for the latest decades when we experience the real pressing of marketing efforts that try to make us buy some goods and services. In fact, a majority of people cannot resist the temptation because of the fact that they have never been fought the skills of long term financial planning. Since they lack such a critical skill, they have to work hard in order to make ends meet; they have been struggling financially all their lives and usually fall into poverty at the end.
In order to prevent and avoid such working life's pattern people should have an opportunity to learn t at least a minimal set of financial knowledge. The better time to do this is the school and university academic years, the time when young people learn how to live in the future adult life. Indeed, the financial subjects that form the attitude toward the future work, career, own business, and money itself, should be included into school curriculum and become obligatory for all students including future musicians, sportsmen, librarians and other professionals which seem to be far away from business, credits, and finances.
To sum up, financial skills give people the opportunities to improve the quality of life, spend money wisely and build assets instead of buying liabilities. Hence, in my opinion, this extremely useful knowledge should be given in school in a mandatory course.
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With all problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other causes. Do you agree or disagree?
In today's modern world, nations spend a significant amount of money on a development of space technologies instead of solving endless problem on the Earth. The popular belief is that people should stop waste money on space exploration until a world peace and harmony will be reached. In my opinion, people should go further into space in order to solve Earth's problem more successfully and efficiently.
Nobody can deny that there are plenty of problem in the world to be solved. Some of them, such as environment pollution, without any appropriate treatment may lead to some fatal consequences, and become a threat for all life on the planet. Others problems, like a hunger, diseases, and wars take thousands life daily. In this case spending an enormous amount of money for discovering of space secrets seems to be at least impractical.
However, from the other point of view, space exploration may help to prevent and avoid even more catastrophic situations. For instance, the long-distance space observation may detect some dangerous space bodies that move toward our planets and can collide with it. In this case consequences would have been much more dramatic than ones of war or some natural cataclysm. In fact, people should develop space technology to have a solution to determinate and deflect or even obliterate dangerous space objects.
From more practical perspective, space technologies help people in many different fields of human every day’s activity. The successful examples of this are the satellite navigation, the weather forecasting, TV and radio-signals transmission etc. In a word, it is impossible to imagine the modern society's life without space technologies. In order to support existing systems and develop new ones, people need to spend money on them; otherwise, all human progress could be stopped.
In conclusion, it is no questions for me that governments should focus on the development of space technologies and, correspondingly, spend money on them. It can also be said that other world’s problems should not be forgotten; governments ought to focus on them to and solve them spending money wisely.
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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree?
In today's modern world, computers play more and more significant role in many areas of human activity, and education is not an exception. The popular belief is that computer systems based on artificial intellect and a global network combined with a special educational software will be able to wipe teachers from the classrooms. In my opinion, this idea is too radical; therefore, people will need teachers as long as they learn something new.
It is undeniable that а computer is a powerful and extremely efficient tool that expands a horizons of education itself. This is particularly true for young people who can satisfy their natural curiosity about the surrounding world, let alone the school subjects using this technical invention. Today, students can find the essential information in the Internet, do some researches and prepare their dissertation much faster than they used to do earlier. In this case a teacher in a classroom seems to be a redundant person.
On the other hand, even the most powerful computer with a full access to the world's data base is not substitute for the face-to-face communication and cooperation of students and well experienced teachers that takes place in the classical educational process. Despite the fact that students have a chance to have access to almost any information, they still need the assistance of teacher who has an experience and the highest level of qualification to help students to classify and understand a new unordered knowledge in a right way. Indeed, if student needs to have an advice or experiences some difficulty in the understanding of his/her subject, he should be able to ask questions and have a feedback from his/her teacher; so, the teachers will be in business as long as the mankind exists.In conclusion, it is no question for me that the education with without teachers is vale just impossible, Most probably the role of teacher will be changed from being a source of information to becoming an assistant and expert adviser for independent learners.
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